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[الفوهرر511]

لو تكرمتوا ....عندي طلب بسيط
أنا ادرس اللغة الانجليزية حاليا .... والمدرس طلب مننا واجب وعليه درجة ..وهذا الواجب مهم بالنسبة لي ....وهو ان نكتب عن تجربة مرت بك بالماضي ....
كتبت موضوع وعاوز حد يصحح لي ..... لو تكرمت .....ممكن ان تسوي لي هذا الجميل ....الليلة
لان الواجب طلوب بكرة الصباح ....مع تقديري
لو ممكن تصححوا لي الموضوع من حيث الجرامر وعلامات الترقيم... الخ
و‘ذا لم يكن بالإمكان.....لا بأس ...اشكركم لأنكم قرأتم رسالتي..

dreams are not enough to get things

Do you dreamed of achieving something in your life. Do you achieve this dream. If your answer about the second question is no, read the following. The dreams are not enough to get things, let me tell you my experience about this. When I graduated in 2001s ,I was dreaming to be instructor at my college, but they did not accept me, although I graduated with excellent degree. So I worked as a teacher at secondary school , but I still dreamed to be an instructor, this dream pushed me to work hard to achieve it, so I still read a lot of math`s books until 2004. I read advert in newspaper said, "We need teachers to work at the university ". I said ,"OK , this is for me.".
I had registered and Successive the entrance examination, more than I had the highest degree of.
Now, I am instructor at my college. This experience thought me that (If you don’t work hard to achieve your dream, it will not be)

[Tafi 4 kimi]

Do you dream of achieving something in your life? Are you able to achieve this dream? If your answer for the second question is “No”, then, read the following. The dreams are not enough to get things, let me tell you my experience about this. When I graduated back in 2001, I was dreaming to be instructor in my college but unfortunately I was not accepted although I graduated with excellent degree. As a result, I worked as a teacher at a secondary school and I kept the dream of being an instructor in my mind. This dream has pushed me to work even harder to achieve it, I continued to read a lot of books related to math till 2004. I read an advertisement in the newspaper saying “We need teachers to work at the university”. I said “Ok, this is for me.”. I had registered and succeed in the entrance examination; moreover, I had the highest degree among others. Now, I am instructor at my college. This experience guided to conclude the thought of “if you don’t work hard to achieve you dream, it will not be”.

All the best of Luck for you

[الفوهرر511]

time is up ...........but thanks