are neighbours necessary??????????

[mira2008]

hi evry body today i m sooooo happy .my topic this day is about neighbours

nowadays a good neighbour has been replaced by modern means of communication and entertainment. but in those days, a good neighbour means some thing completly different.
a good neighbour know every thing about you and like you sooo much too ,. he never let you down . when you are in trouble, he come to rescue you .if one of the family was sick in the night , he set up until the doctor come . sometimes, he send for the doctor himself that's agood thing.For me too, i love every body and my neighbours because they are my second family. I'm soooooooooooooo happy for this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and i hope that every body love his neighbour and will love my topic too

[boodybo]

المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة mira2008

hi evry body today i m sooooo happy .my topic this day is about neighbours

nowadays a good neighbour has been replaced by modern means of communication and entertainment. but in those days, a good neighbour means some thing completly different.
a good neighbour know every thing about you and like you sooo much too ,. he never let you down . when you are in trouble, he come to rescue you .if one of the family was sick in the night , he set up until the doctor come . sometimes, he send for the doctor himself that's agood thing.For me too, i love every body and my neighbours because they are my second family. I'm soooooooooooooo happy for this !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and i hope that every body love his neighbour and will love my topic too

بداية موضوعك رائع وأحييكي لأنك لم تكتبي أو تنسخي الموضوع من أي مكان ولكنه نابع منك
ثانيا أحب ان اضيف بعض الملاحظات وهي أنك يا اختي العزيزة تكتبين وكانك تتكلمين بمعنى انك لا تأخذي بالك من الازمنة او بداية الجمل ونهايتها
لا تقلقي فأنا أيضا كنت مثلك تماما وكنت أتكلم عن أي موضوع بصيغة الماضي وأصعبها على نفسي مع أني اقدر اتكلم على الموضوع بصيغة المضارع بطريقة أسهل
وانت بتتكلمي المفروض كانك بتتكلمي عربي مثلا بتقولي
لما بتكون مريض جارك بيأتي ويذهب ليحضر لك الدكتور ويسهر بجانبك الخ
لو لاحظتي بتلاقي انك بتتكلمي بصيغة المضارع وليس الماضي وراح تلاقيها اسهل بكتير في الكتابة والكلام بحيث ان الي قدامك يفهمك


تقبلي مروري وصدقيني موضوعك روعة ومنتظر منك مواضيع أكثر وأكثر

[شذى الوادي]

my best friend mira your topic is great and you wrote about something very important in our societiy ,
I just want to tell you that you have to but (s)after the verb like this (he comes , he sends ) I am sure that you know this rule but I love to remind you


with all love to the best friend

[mira2008]

thanks evry body im soo happy for ur help