طلب مساعدة في تصحيح تعبير

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بسم الله الرحمن الرحيم


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The uniform is very interesting. In my opinion, I think its good idea because the students will feel like team working together. Also it's help parents when they buy clothes for New Year. In addition it's decrease the problems students in the selection confusion the clothes. Moreover the uniform is easy to find by poor people, because a lot of shops will buy it's. Actually the student should think about education more than clothes design by famous person. If some student don't accept that, we can change their mind by explain the importance of the uniform. In summary I hope our students accept that idea because many reason. For example, save the money to help our family. Finally, we should do our best to realize success.

في انتظار مساعدة الاخوة المبدعين ، لتصحيح الاخطاء الاملائية و النحوية :D

[سلطان الرياض]

School uniform cloth is important thing because I think the school uniform is a good idea for the students because of all the students will feel that, they work together. Also that will be more easier for their parents when they go to buy the clothes. In other words. when the students are going to buy the clothes, they will not be confused to choose it. However, if there is a lot of stores to sale the school uniform, I think that will create more competition between the stores to lower prices. In fact the students should to understand why we want to uniform their cloths in
the school. It isn't only for the design their cloths but also to make them to feel more friendly with each other. In conclusion, I hope the students will accept my opinion for this reasons.

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